Awoken (cinquain)
I wrote the first cinquain in a different form a long time ago.. but thought it looked better as a cinquain.. then I also thought it needed something more so I wrote another cinquain.. Once IGazed at...
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That's a lovely pair of cinquains...each complimenting the other...and the sense of acceptance and love is overwhelming...it is only when we allow ouselves to recognise and accept the imperfections of...
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After more than a quarter of century with someone, I have found the same wisdom as you have so thoughtful preached in your complimenting cinquains. I have to remind myself of this wisdom at trying...
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Paul,I agree with you. acceptance and love go hand in hand. Thanks for the kind reply..Hugs! SilviaWhere ever we go we always leave a part of ourselves within the hearts of others.
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Sentimente,I am pleased my poem reminded you of wisdom you already knew .. I think the key is remembering and cherishing those who are dear to us and appreciating them. loving them unconditionally.....
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Thank you, Silvia. The second quarter-century should be the best one yet. -- Sentimente
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Sentiment,I have not doubt it will be if you make it so eh? Hugs! SilviaWhere ever we go we always leave a part of ourselves within the hearts of others.
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I found it interesting how the first cinquain echoed with disappointment, and then that was replaced by acceptance in the second. Good write.
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Michael,The first cinquain was not really about disappointment but more about understanding. So the second complemented the first with acceptance eh? Thanks for the read and comments.Hugs! SilviaWhere...
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